I really like how you colored the girl in the foreground. Very nice lighting effect ^-^

I donno how you could improve it

OH~ so you don't know who that girl is?? hihi. Thank you

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A scattered dream is like a far off memory...
A far off memory is like a scattered dream...

I want to line the pieces up...
yours... and mine

I couldn't remember her name ^-^;;;

haha its ok.maybe cause its a Korean name its hard to remember O.o;

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A scattered dream is like a far off memory...
A far off memory is like a scattered dream...

I want to line the pieces up...
yours... and mine

Woah, amazing lighting and shading there.
the light adds more to the mystery

That's Jae Hee, right?

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Call me KiKi.

I am Edorad Leones at ~Bleach-Crew!</sub>

in the middle yep she is~ wonder why?~~~~MYSTERY

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A scattered dream is like a far off memory...
A far off memory is like a scattered dream...

I want to line the pieces up...
yours... and mine

I think Jae Hee's (woah i almost said Jae Rang there o.o) pose was excellent and i like the concept of the two other characters in the background. Hmm some things that you could possibly change to make it better (in my opinion) would be to not include the background characters in the pattern design but still keep the opacity low. To me it just looks a bit odd since they're part of the rocky texture. Also, you should decrease the size of Volume One and slide Jae Hee a bit to the left so that the distance of space is equal on both sides of their heads. Or was your idea to make a more interesting point of view? Um... ^ . ^; Well, last thing i was thinking was to make the white outline on Sinners bolder because it looks like its a part of the background. Maybe a shadow and darker shade of gray would work ... ehrm sorry if i didn't help, hehe


Oh and ... is Jae Hee in the middle because she's a very very important character to the plot of the story?

hmm, now that I see...It would look better. for the characters since I lowered the opacity they got into the design pattern oops, I'll try and fix that he . I was going to put Jae Hee in the center but since the necklace is important in the story I had to put her on the side...T3T

and yes she is the main character~ and someone else there, are 2, but since volume one takes most of Jae Hee's story blah blah, I had to put her to look more standing out..

Thanks! I'll change if I'm not too lazy *goes to do finish her drawing lol*

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A scattered dream is like a far off memory...
A far off memory is like a scattered dream...

I want to line the pieces up...
yours... and mine