Sinners volume 1 cover page

I think Jae Hee's (woah i almost said Jae Rang there o.o) pose was excellent and i like the concept of the two other characters in the background. Hmm some things that you could possibly change to make it better (in my opinion) would be to not include the background characters in the pattern design but still keep the opacity low. To me it just looks a bit odd since they're part of the rocky texture. Also, you should decrease the size of Volume One and slide Jae Hee a bit to the left so that the distance of space is equal on both sides of their heads. Or was your idea to make a more interesting point of view? Um... ^ . ^; Well, last thing i was thinking was to make the white outline on Sinners bolder because it looks like its a part of the background. Maybe a shadow and darker shade of gray would work ... ehrm sorry if i didn't help, hehe


Oh and ... is Jae Hee in the middle because she's a very very important character to the plot of the story?